The point of a craft section is not to worship technique in isolation. It is to show how form produces feeling. Editing, blocking, sound, duration, restraint: these are not ornaments. They are the machinery of conviction.
That is why this section belongs in the first draft. It tells the reader that Screen Share is not only about taste or news. It is about how films are made to land in the body.
The finished version can get denser, sharper, and more specific. For now, the important thing is that the path exists and feels editorially real.